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考试真题

The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目分析

●本次考试的题目属于环境类话题，该类话题考试的频率也比较高，本次提供一篇之前考过的相似范文供参考。

●范文开头段介绍背景改写题目后提出个人倾向。

●主体段分为两个段落，第一段从国家层面分析自然资源消耗过快的原因；第二段提出中国的案例，警示社会和政府不应该枉顾责任，以利益为驱动。

●结尾段总结全文强调主题。

范文示例

Introduction

Background sentence

Depletion of the world’s natural resources (世界自然资源的枯竭) has been the source of major alarm and discontentment (重大恐慌和不满) over the past half century or so.

Rephrase the topic

Evidence presented by experts that the finite nature of natural resources (自然资源的有限性) will lead to major energy crisis(重大能源危机) within the next few decades is still not being taken seriously (认真对待) by powerful figures (权威人士) in government,or those connected to the oil and coal lobbies (石油和煤炭游说).

Attitude or personal opinion

Despite such substantial and powerful opposition (如此强大的反对力量), collective action (集体行动) must be taken to address the severity of the crisis (解决严重的危机).

译文

背景句

在过去半个世纪左右的时间里，世界自然资源的枯竭一直是引起重大恐慌和不满的根源。

改写题目

专家提出的证据表明，自然资源的有限性将在未来几十年内导致重大能源危机，但政府或那些与石油和煤炭游说有关的权威人士仍然没有认真对待。

立场或个人观点

尽管有如此强大的反对力量，仍然必须采取集体行动来解决严重的危机。

Body paragraph 1

Idea

The most obvious cause of this state of affairs is without doubt that this will financially and politically threaten the interests of (威胁…的利益) many people.

Reason (Why)

Such figures are able to use their wealth and standing (利用他们的财富和地位) to buy political influence (政治影响力) in major oil-consuming countries (主要石油消费国) to manipulate government policy (操纵政府的政策).

Explain (Example)

This makes a significant enough number of politicians (n. 政治家) who determine to transform to renewable energy (向可再生能源过渡) fraught with obstacles(困难重重), because they face relentless and intractable opposition (无情的反对) of the powerful fuel lobbies.

Conclusion

Therefore, development of environmental protection can barely be satisfying.

译文

观点

造成这种情况的最明显的原因无疑是，这将在财政和政治上威胁到许多人的利益。

解释观点 (理由)

这些人能够利用他们的财富和地位，在主要石油消费国购买政治影响力来操纵政府的政策。

进一步解释或例子

这使得很多决心向可再生能源过渡的政治家困难重重，因为他们必然面临强大的燃料游说团体的无情的反对。

结论

因此，环境保护的发展很难令人满意。

Body paragraph 2

Idea

However, we do need urgently to put aside (放在一边) the interests and give sustainable development (可持续发展) of the global into priority.

Reason (Why)

The government of China has long expressed its resolution (决心) to promote green economy and cutting pollution (减少污染).

Explain (Example)

Recent years, it adopts a more interventionist approach (一种更加严重的干涉方法), which introduces some of the most progressive and far-reaching environmental policies (一些最进步和影响深远的环境政策) in the world.

Conclusion

Without the influence of money-backed oil lobbies (资金支持的石油游说集团), the Chinese government is in a better position to (处于有利地位) introduce and strictly enact environmental legislation (严格执行环境立法), designed to transition (v. 转变为) the country to a greener energy model (一个更环保的能源模式).

译文

观点

但是，我们现在迫切需要把利益放在一边，把全球的可持续发展放在首位。

解释观点 (理由)

中国政府长期以来一直决心推动绿色经济，减少污染。

进一步解释或例子

近年来，它采取了一种更加严重的干涉方法，引进了世界上一些最进步和影响深远的环境政策。

结论

在没有资金支持的石油游说集团的影响下，中国政府在引入和严格执行环境立法方面处于有利地位，旨在将中国（的能源模式）转变为一个更环保的能源模式。

Conclusion

Main idea of the essay

The solution to reducing our collective consumption of fuel (对燃料的消耗) is to look at the Chinese model.

Prediction

A strong state which is prepared to act in defiance of (不顾)the interests of the rich (富人利益) is in a far better position to reduce its dependency on (减少对…依赖) natural resources.

译文

主要观点总结

为减少公众对燃料的消耗，可以参考中国的模式。

预测

一个不顾富人利益而准备采取行动的强大国家，在减少对自然资源的依赖方面处于有利的地位。

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词汇积累

depletion of the world’s natural resources

世界自然资源的枯竭

major alarm and discontentment

重大恐慌和不满

the finite nature of natural resources

自然资源的有限性

major energy crisis

重大能源危机

being taken seriously

认真对待

powerful figures

权威人士

the oil and coal lobbies

石油和煤炭游说

such substantial and powerful opposition

如此强大的反对力量

collective action

集体行动

address the severity of the crisis

解决严重的危机

threaten the interests of

威胁…的利益

use their wealth and standing

利用他们的财富和地位

political influence

政治影响力

major oil-consuming countries

主要石油消费国

manipulate government policy

操纵政府的政策

politicians

n. 政治家

transform to renewable energy

向可再生能源过渡

fraught with obstacles

困难重重

relentless and intractable opposition

无情的反对

put aside

放在一边

sustainable development

可持续发展

expressed its resolution

决心

cutting pollution

减少污染

a more interventionist approach

一种更加严重的干涉方法

the most progressive and far-reaching environmental policies

一些最进步和影响深远的环境政策

money-backed oil lobbies

资金支持的石油游说集团

in a better position to

处于有利地位

strictly enact environmental legislation

严格执行环境立法

a greener energy model

一个更环保的能源模式

collective consumption of fuel

对燃料的消耗

act in defiance of

不顾

the interests of the rich

富人利益

reduce its dependency on

减少对…依赖

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