雅思写作作业（2-学生应不应该写作业）

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

讨论双边观点，一般建议写成五个段落：开头 * 1、针对观点 A 的讨论 * 1、针对观点 B 的讨论 * 1、自己的观点 * 1、结尾 * 1当然也有四段式的写法：开头 * 1、针对观点 A 的讨论 * 1、针对观点 B 的讨论 * 1、结尾 * 1，这种写法要将 自己的观点 放入结尾段中。关键词分析：homework题目中的观点A，也就是老师应不应该给学生布置作业，对作业做了限定——“老师布置的作业”，不要跑偏；观点B，也就是作业对于教育孩子举足轻重，并没有直接否定“老师布置作业的意义”，而是强调了作业在教育中的重要性。综上，正文观点没必要完全相反形成悖论。

开头段1. 社会/题目背景句：竞争导致学生课内外压力增加2. 题目改写句：（语法、词汇、句型尽量替换）3. 个人观点句：适当作业

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Fiercer competition produces unrelenting curricular and extracurricular pressure on school children and thus comes the argument whether students should be given homework by their teachers. I am of the point that adequate homework is compulsory. fierce通常与competition搭配，表示“激烈的竞争”；unrelenting作为形容词修饰pressure表示“持续不断的压力”；extracurricular（课外的）可在口语和写作中作after-class替换词；compulsory在这里表示“必要的”，通常还会见到compulsory education，表示“义务教育”。

观点 A / 主体段 1 1. 所以作业会加剧学生负担 2. 因为竞争激烈，学生被迫要求学习各种技能 3. 进一步影响学生身心健康

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Homework makes students carry onerous burden in their learning process. Fierce competition among school children leads parents to force their children to learn various skills in and out of school’s syllabus, including arts, sports, literature, etc. Massive tasks combined with afterschool activity and homework could have negative impacts on the physical and mental health as well as development. onerous意为“费力/艰巨/令人焦虑的”，此处与burden搭配，表“重担”；in and out of school's syllabus直接表示课内外，替换curricular and extracurricular；physical and mental health为“身心健康”。

观点 B / 主体段 21. 所以作业可以帮助学生提高学习短板2. 因为老师清楚学生的学习进度，能够针对性地布置学习任务3. 进一步提升学生的学习效果，促进知识吸收

Sample by Sheryl:Assigning homework for students could help them tackle issues and problems that relate to their study because systematic teaching materials and progress set by teachers allow teachers to be clear about students’ study performance and achievement hence focus on specified improvement for individual student. What’s more, handing out homework and assignments to students could also increase study effectiveness and enhance knowledge acquisition for students. assign homework 意为“布置作业”，assign的名词形式assignment可表“任务/作业”；tackle/address/solve/figure out/ deal with/ handle等动词均可表示“解决/处理”，比如“处理问题”等；systematic teaching表“系统性教学”；knowledge acquisition的动词形式为acquire knowledge，也可以用gain/get knowledge之类的表达，不可以用learn knowledge,因为knowledge是学习的结果，只能“获取”，不能“学习”。

自己的观点 / 主体段 3 1. 所以适当的作业是必要的2. 因为作业可以帮助学生巩固所学知识3.进一步表明完成作业不仅能强化学生对知识点的印象，还能实现理论和实践的结合，巩固学习效果

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Adequate amount of homework sticking to syllabus and study arrangement is necessary for students as it could provide students with a chance to build up a firm knowledge base. Completing homework could not only form a clearer and deeper impression about knowledge gained in the class, but also achieve a powerful combination of method/theory and practice, which will maximise study effectiveness and efficiency. knowledge base 意为“知识基础/储备”；method/theory and practice意为“理论与实践”；effective和efficient二者的区别在于前者强调结果，表“有效果的”，而后者强调过程，表“有效率的”，文中为名词用法。

结尾作业很重要

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From my point of view, school children are suggested and encouraged to finish homework given by their teachers, as homework is with great help for their academic absorption and development as well as their practical application.be with great help=be very helpful，后者用得都快吐了，换个新说法吧；practical application表示“实践/实际应用”。