e-mail邮件的本质(中自我介绍类的邮件如何写更有效)

因为之前更新过几次关于职场E-mail 写作的干货,客服反映有不少的朋友更希望分点详细的解说,以后只要有时间,就会给大家更新一些职场E-mail 写作中的干货,供大家学习参考。

e-mail邮件的本质(中自我介绍类的邮件如何写更有效)(1)

今天,我们就来说说——E-mail 中自我介绍类的邮件该如何写。

这类电子邮件的目的是让大家对刚到职的你有大概的认识,因此邮件的内容可包括:

1. 先前的职称(your previous job title)

2. 目前的职称及职务内容(your current position and job duties)为了有助于往后的合作,邮件中可以用到这些表达:

● I look forward to meeting you soon.

本人期待能很快与您会面。

● I'm also eager to sit down with you and hear your ideas.

本人也渴望与您商谈,听取您的想法。

3. 如果邮件的内容已很有礼貌,就不需要在信件结尾处写上 Thank you(谢谢您)之类的感谢的表达了。

如果遇到需要撰写这类邮件,你不知道如何下笔,不妨就从这三点开始写:

  1. 点出来信主旨。(I'm writing to you to...)
  2. 简单介绍先前工作内容。(Before that, I worked for...)
  3. 说明现任职位及工作职责。(I'm responsible for...)

下面给大家罗列一些这三点表达时的常用语:

I'm writing to you to V. / The reason I'm writing to you is to V.

译:我來信旨在⋯⋯

● I'm writing to you to tell you about our company.

我来信旨在向您介绍我们公司的情况。

● The reason I'm writing to you is to introduce myself.

我来信旨在向您做自我介紹。

I joined the company (date / day / time). / I started working for the company (date / day / time).

译:我在(某日期 / 某天 / 某时间)开始就职于此公司。

● I joined the company at the beginning of this month.

我在这个月初开始任职于此公司。

● I started working for the company in early May.

我5月初开始任职于此公司。

Previously,... / Before that,...

译:先 / 之前,⋯⋯

● Previously, I was a sales representative with a multinational company.

先前,我在一家跨国公司担任业务专员。

● Before that, I worked for Paramount Products for three years.

之前,我服务于派拉蒙产品公司,任期长达3年。

I'm responsible for N/V-ing / I'm in charge of N/V-ing

译:我负责 / 掌管⋯⋯

● I'm responsible for sales in the Asia-Pacific region.

我负责亚太区业务。

● I'm in charge of the sales department.

我掌管业务部门。

I look forward to V-ing / I'm eager to V

译:我期待⋯⋯/我很渴望⋯⋯

● I look forward to meeting you in the future.

我很期待未来能与您碰面。

● I'm eager to discuss this matter with you.

我很渴望与您讨论此事。


说了这么多,不如我们来看一篇范例吧~

To: Dean Lansing, project manager

From: Jenny Rockfort

Subject: Self-Introduction

Dear Mr. Lansing:

I'm writing to you and all of my other colleagues here at Aim Communications to introduce myself. I have recently been appointed marketing manager. I joined the company last week. Before that, I was an assistant marketing manager for a company named Best Value. As the new marketing manager for Aim Communications, I'm responsible for developing new promotions to help increase our sales. I look forward to meeting you soon. I'm also eager to sit down with you and hear your ideas on our upcoming marketing and advertising campaigns.

Yours truly,

Jenny Rockfort

Marketing Manager

译文:

收件人:企划经理 狄恩‧兰辛

寄件人:珍妮‧罗克福特

主旨:自我介绍

亲爱的兰辛先生:

本人来信旨在向您及“目标通信”其他同仁自我介绍。本人近日获聘担任营销经理。本人于上星期加入公司团队。在此之前,本人在一家名为“超值”的公司担任营销副经理。身为“标的通信”新任营销经理,本人负责开发新的促销活动,以协助提高业绩。本人期待能很快与您会面。本人也渴望与您洽谈,听取您对即将进行之营销及广告活动的想法。

目标通信营销经理

珍妮‧罗克福特 谨启

语法知识站:

本篇范文中这几个知识点值得大家注意:

< 一 >

I write to you to introduce myself. (x)

I am writing to you to introduce myself. (√)

一般现在时的使用时机为描述现在的常态或习惯,因此第一句句意为“我都会写信给您做自我介绍”,不合逻辑。第二句使用现在进行时,表“我此刻在写信给您,旨在自我介绍”,合乎逻辑,故为正确用法。

< 二 >

appoint vt. 任命

appoint sb (as) 职位

译:任命某人担任某职位

appoint sb to V

译:任命某人从事⋯⋯

例句:

● Brian has just been appointed manager of the sales department.

布莱恩刚接被任命为销售部经理。

● A detective was appointed to investigate the case.

某刑警被指派调查此案。

< 三 >

Before that, I was an assistant marketing manager for a company named Best Value.

= Before that, I was an assistant marketing manager for a company (which was) named Best Value.

注意:上列第 2 句划线部分为形容词从句,可化简为分词短语。

< 四 >

be responsible for sth

译:负责某职务 / 应受责备 / 成为起因

例句:

● Mike is responsible for designing the entire project.

迈克负责设计全部工程方案。

● Who's responsible for this terrible mess?

是谁弄得这么乱?

● Last month's bad weather was responsible for the crop failure.

上个月恶劣的天气是导致作物歉收的原因。

be responsible to sb

= report to sb

译:对(主管者或上级)负责

例句:

● Mike is responsible to Mr. Lu, the sales manager.

迈可直接对业务经理刘先生负责。

简洁明了的邮件“自我介绍”,能让人一目了然,更好的促进工作中的交通。写工作邮件的“自我介绍”记住这关键的三点一定要交代清楚:点出来信主旨;简单介绍先前工作内容;说明现任职位及工作职责。


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