英语作文万能句开头和结尾高分 阅卷老师最想看到的英语作文4种开头
今天,我们为同学们分享英语作文的4大开头、4大结尾以及常用的句型,都在这篇文章里了,看完记得背诵和收藏!
英语写作文的步骤
要经过一审、二写、三连、四改四步:
一审”即审题:主要是看清楚题目要求,读懂题目所表达的含义,抓住要点,注意文体是什么,准备写作的人称和时态:如果是日记和故事,宜采用过去时态;如是简介之类的,宜采用现在时态。
“二写”即列纲:主要是列个提纲,考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬长避短,避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时,就用同(近)义词或同义句代替,不要使用没有把握的词句,并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。
“三连”即连句成文:根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合句要搭配运用。
“四改”即修改润色全文:主要是看全文符不符合题目要求,行文是否流畅,有没有遗漏要点;语法是不是正确,包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
*总之做到
三审:体裁、时态、人称;
三思:词汇—>短语—>句式;
三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯
文章分3段:
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
好作文开头的四种方式
1. “开门见山”式开头
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。
如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……
再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
作文结尾的种方式
1.自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。
如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2. 首尾呼应,升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。
如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.
3. 反问结尾,引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。
如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?
4. 表达祝愿,阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。
如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.
另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
好作文常用的句型和连接词
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…
And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What is more, Besides
3.表转折对比关系的:However, but
Although clause(从句),On the one hand… On the other hand… Some…, while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because, As ,So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点: In my opinion
9.表总结:In a word. In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型
如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.
It's bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
常用状语从句句型
(1)时间:when, not…until, as soon as
(2)目的:so that 从句; to do(为了)
(3)结果:so…that 从句, too…to do(太……以至于……)
(4)条件:if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)
(5)让步:though, although, even though, even if ,no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
(6)比较:as…as…, not so…as…, than
1. 重点句型
(1)It is said that 句子 据说… It is reported that 句子 据报道…
(2)There is no need to do 没必要做…
(3) It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
(4)so /such… that … 如此… 以至于… too … to do 太… 而不能…
(5)not…until… 直到…才… 例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back。
(6)The reason why 句子 is that 句子 … 的原因是…
(7)The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)
(8)That is why 句子 那是…的原因
(9)That is because 句子 那是因为…
(10)as we all know, 句子 据我们所知
(11) it is generally/ publicly known / considered that…, 众所周知
2. 提建议
I suggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做…
If I were you, I would do… 我要是你的话,我会做…
It’s best to do 最好做…
had better (not) do 最好(不)做
how about / what about doing …怎么样?
I think you should do 我认为你应该…
Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不…
3. 努力做…
try to do努力做…
try one’s best to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做…
do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做…
4. 表示喜欢和感兴趣
like / love doing
enjoy doing
be fond of doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing
5. 表示想/希望
want to do = would like to do 想做…
hope to do 希望做…
expect to do 期待着做…
wish to do 希望做…
consider doing 考虑做…
6. 打算做… / 计划做…
plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算做… decide to do 决定做…
make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做…
7. 只加doing 作宾语的动词
finish 完成/ practice 练习 / suggest建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢doing
look forward to doing 盼望做…
keep on doing 坚持做…
dream of doing 梦想做…
can’t help doing 情不自禁地做…
keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做…
be busy (in ) doing be busy with 名词 忙于做…
spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on 名词 花费时间做…
have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 或 with 名词 做…有困难
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