高考真题看图作文英语（高考图表作文44Our）

Unit 44 Our School

根据下面你们学校的平面图，以Our School为题，介绍一下你校的大体情况。

注意：1.叙述要有条理，方位清楚，应包括图中主要内容，可适当增减细节，使内容连贯。

2.词数100左右。

“范文”

Our School

Our school is a beautiful garden school. When you enter the school gate, you will see there is a main① road leading straight to② the teaching building in the middle of our school. On each side of the road there is a flowerbed③ where various④ flowers are in bloom⑤. On you left, behind the flowerbed is the lab building, where we do all kinds of⑥ experiments. The office building is on the right side. Behind the teaching buliding is a playground, to the west of which there is a swimming pool.⑦ We have also planted a lot of trees in our school. Now they are growing very well.

Our school is beautiful, isn’t it?

“注释：”

①main：主要的

②lead straight to：直接通向……

③flowerbed：花坛

④various：各种各样的

⑤be in bloom：（花儿）在开放

⑥all kinds of：各种各样的

⑦swimming pool：游泳池

“点评：”

这是一篇根据图表内容展开的议论性说明文。这是一种常考题型。

作者在文章首句直接切题，然后根据学校的平面图提示具体展开说明。文章采用空间顺序法，将学校内部建筑的方位叙述得有条有理，清楚明白。为了使文章连贯、紧凑，作者使用了v-ing短语作定语，如“a main road leading straight to…”，还使用了非限制性定语从句，如“where various flowers are in bloom”等，这些细节的增加使文章内容更充实。最后，作者还使用了倒装句，“Behind the teaching building is a playground, to the west of which there is a swimming pool”，这里倒装句的使用恰到好处，是出于上、下文结构的需要。最后一句议论呼应了首句，也切合主题。，使文章更完整。

全文结构完整、紧凑、句式变化多样是本文的一大特色。多种句型的运用使得语言丰富，又简洁明了，叙述得有条理、方位清楚，是一篇优秀的范文。

资料来源：英语作文高分必背丛书：高考/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005