天真烂漫的笑容（野性纯真的笑容）

A young man whose good looks and innocent smile have turned him into an internet celebrity has sparked a surge in interest in his hometown among tourists.

丁真10秒就火了，火得莫名其妙——因为他远在康巴，不知道网络时代的城市缺失“野性的纯真”，大家心里都缺失久违的“野性的呼唤”。

这小段文字，读了几遍，总感觉a surge in interest没有a surge of interest好。这是第一点。

第二点，这么野性纯真的笑容，用a young man开头，置引起“网红”的真正原因于句子中间而不顾，是败笔，也是劣招。改用good looks and innocent smile开头至少配得上康巴少年丁真的野性与纯真。

这句话这么修改：

Good looks and innocent smile have turned a young man into an internet celebrity and sparked a surge of interest in his hometown among tourists.

再修改下句子结尾的词语，比较下：

Good looks and innocent smile have turned a young man into an internet celebrity and sparked a surge of interest among tourists in his hometown.

词，还是这些词。位置变，情感也变。