英语作文如何设置范文(英语作文提分技巧)
串句是指错误地将两个独立的分句串在一起,不用连词或标点符号连接。最常见的问题在于直接用逗号“,”连接两个意思完整的句子。如果将逗号用于完整的独立句之间,便会产生串句。例:
Mike decided to stop smoking, he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.
这个句子怎么修改,这里建议五种修改方法:
1. Mike decided to stop smoking, for he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.
2. Mike decided to stop smoking because he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.
3. Mike decided to stop smoking, not wanting to die of lung cancer.
4. Mike decided to stop smoking; he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.
5. Mike decided to stop smoking. He didn’t want to die of lung cancer.
Exercises: revise the run-ons
改为:
I wanted badly to cry; however, I remained cold and silent.
I wanted badly to cry. However, I remained cold and silent
改为:
A lot of men today get their hair styled, and they use perfume and other cosmetics as well.
改为:
In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards, for passing them was not easy.
In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards because passing them was not easy.
In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards. Passing them was not easy.
改为:
The Christmas party was dull, so Jane and I left at 9:30.
改为:
People are worried about the future, and they are especially concerned about the economy.
改为:
I got up at 7 a.m., and then I went to school.
改为:
When the projector broke for a second time, some people in the audience hissed, and others shouted for a refund.
改为:
While Cindy found the movie disappointing, Lee thought it was wonderful.
Cindy found the movie disappointing while Lee thought it was wonderful.
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