写英语作文手机版（高考情景作文69Mobile）

Unit 69 Mobile Phones

移动电话发明的时间并不长，但现在已很普及，请你就移动电话的优缺点发表自己的看法，写一篇120左右的短文。

“范文”

It is not very long since the first mobile phone① was produced. The invention has changed people’s life. People find it much more convenient② to get in touch with③ each other with a mobile phone. They can take it with them wherever they go and make a phone call whenever they want. However, a mobile phone can also bind④ people to work. More often than not⑤, businessmen trade with⑥ one another⑦ by phone in their office, in a car, and even on the beach miles distant from⑧ their companies. The ring of a mobile phone often interrupts⑨ a meeting, a party, or even a dinner. Because of mobile phones, people miss nothing but free time and space. This is not what I am thinking about the modern life.

“注释：”

①mobile phone： 移动电话

②convenient： 方便的

③get in touch with somebody： 与某人取得联系

④bind： 妨碍

⑤more often than not： 多半，往往

⑥trade with somebody： 与某人做生意（打交道）

⑦one another： 彼此，互相

⑧on the beach mile distant from…： 离……几英里远的海滩上

⑨interrupt： 打断

“点评：”

这是根据情景提示展开的议论性说明文。

文章开头即按照情景提示，指出移动电话发明的时间并不长，但现在已很普及。随后作者用“The invention has changed people’s life.”这句话很自然地过渡到下文：移动电话给人们带来的好的影响。它可随身携带，随时拨打。有了它，人们彼此联系方便多了。接着，作者用however话锋一转，过渡到移动电话的负面影响: 移动电话也会妨碍人们的工作。然后举例加以说明。有理有据，很有说服力，从而用事实说明了移动电话的优缺点。在文章结尾处，作者紧扣主题，发表了自己的见解。

全文主题鲜明，结构完整，并运用了对比法和一些过渡词语和句子，如however, more often than not等，使文章层次分明，衔接自然。

资料来源：英语作文高分必背丛书：高考/李华田主编，武汉大学出版社，2005